NaNoWriMo, Day 5: 1722/8678.

1722/8678

Another day where I could use about half of the existing story, but I can already see the motivations and the plot complications altering the original.  This is good, though.  Stuff that works in a short story doesn’t always work in a novel.  Besides, this is how you learn.

Also, this is where Frozen Dreams gets a little more complicated for me.  I need to start adding secondary characters, a subplot or two, and a good deal more action.  Why, there’s only been one fight scene so far!  And in a pulp detective story, too. Tsk, tsk…