First Draft, Vignette from Frozen Dreams: Gonzalez Farm.

4 thoughts on “First Draft, Vignette from Frozen Dreams: Gonzalez Farm.”

1. Interesting. Folk magic, serious magic, politics… Still working out how to paese the world-build,but enjoying the talw.
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   Well begun,Mr. Lane.
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   Mew

   1. Must not post from phone late in the evening when the eyeballs are sticky with sleep.
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      “how to parse the world-build”
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      “enjoying the tale”
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      Seriously, Moe, this is good. This is very good.
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      Mew

2. Hard-boiled pulp, but the boiling was done with a “heat water” spell. So good.

3. I bust out laughing for a good minute seeing “C.S. Lewis in the original Old American”. I hope he would laugh at that too lest his unquiet shade decide to haunt you.

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