It holds up surprisingly well, considering that I wrote it a goodly while before I published it on Patreon. Also, I’m publishing novels now, after all… although, indeed, there is not all that much money in it.
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That is the second creepiest thing I remember reading. The creepiest was your thing about the monster of the Erebus (or was it the Terror?). Good job, I think.
Tight, with a voice, and no longer than it needs to be.
If only all short stories were such.
Hey, I remember this one! One of your best pieces really. Bravo.
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Are we sure this restaurant wasn’t just a TARDIS?
I dunno. It was just this weird Mickey Dee’s with a weird and way bigger dining area than you’d expect.