I take two points off the style for the profanity: a little is fine, but after the fourth bleeped-out word you’re being derivative. As for execution… the hoe was a nice touch, but if you hit a camera with one I expect to see pieces fly.
What? No, I didn’t take points off because people didn’t get hurt. That’s just sick; you don’t want people to actually get hurt in these things. No, I took points off because she didn’t go after the second camera, too.