…which is a better title than the one that I came up with originally. At least, that’s my reaction now. Ask me again in a couple of months.
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I like the new title. I liked the short-short the first time I read it, but .. the title lets the reader just *lock in* on the *precise* nature of the violation ..
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Mew
I didn’t read it before the new title, so….
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Very well crafted, Moe. Very well crafted, indeed.