Working on FROZEN DREAMS book revisions this week.

Got two chapters done today, but am now facing the alpha reader* notes on Chapter 6. The ‘you need to sprinkle some of this exposition sh*t around the first few chapters’ notes. Which I am dreading, because that’s worrrrrk and I don’t wannnna.

But it’d be nice if the second draft was done before the new book gets started, so I’m going to have to buckle down for the next two weeks.

Moe Lane

*I know folks volunteered, but: it’s my wife. She can write and she knows the best ways to be surgically brutal towards my deathless prose. Which is precisely what I needed.

6 thoughts on “Working on FROZEN DREAMS book revisions this week.”

    1. Oh, I’ll take the feedback from the beta readers, too. But we’ve been married for over a decade; she knows how to tell me when I’m full of it without it leaving bruises. 🙂

      1. “Without leaving bruises” ..
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        ::dons mandated reporter hat::
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        Mr. Lane, blink twice if you believe you are in danger…
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        Okay, more seriously, it’s good to have an in-house alpha-reader; I’m happy for you, and waiting for you to take my money!
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        Mew

      1. I guess it depends on what you’re hoping to get out of it, and how think your skin is. I’m going to take a stab at traditional publishing when I finish my current work in progress.

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