…and I may be done for the moment. Doing chapter edits always requires more brainpower than I expect it to. Maybe because I have to think about the edit’s relationship with the rest of the text? Or something like that.
By the way: one reason that you should get an editor when you can is for the questions you get asked about your text. There are things that I know about the story, but never spelled out. Or, in some cases, articulated. Having somebody point out possible obscurities is a definite help.