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Another day where I could use about half of the existing story, but I can already see the motivations and the plot complications altering the original. This is good, though. Stuff that works in a short story doesn’t always work in a novel. Besides, this is how you learn.
Also, this is where Frozen Dreams gets a little more complicated for me. I need to start adding secondary characters, a subplot or two, and a good deal more action. Why, there’s only been one fight scene so far! And in a pulp detective story, too. Tsk, tsk…