I need a better name for the book. Anyway, we’re at 72,406/80,000, which is nicely ahead of schedule for me. The only problem is, I can’t really excerpt anything because I was just smoothing out the text and adding sentences and paragraphs here and there. Real useful stuff, but nothing earth-shattering. There’s a couple of more places for more actual content, but not for a bit.
This is not the next Kickstarter book. The next Kickstarter book is a collection of Fermi Resolution short stories. It’s also not the next thing for sale. The next thing for sale is… the subject of another post.
I think [Character] and the [MacGuffin] is a played out bit that makes me think “Youth” novels.
“Frozen Dreams” is an excellent title, for example. Pithy, yet topical, and memorable. Doesn’t even have to be a core part of the story, just a simple yet memorable thingy-of-interest to tease.
The [ person ] who [ meta-action ]ed is also rather played .. “The Girl Who Played With Fire”, forex. Then, there’s the combination of the two .. “River Tam Beats Up Everybody”…
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More seriously .. the title should capture the imagination of potential readers .. the authors’ name on the cover should capture the loyal readers.
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NO idea what to do with Morgan to achieve this.
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Mew