11/03/2024 NotAWriMo, BANSHEE BEACH: 1677/55493.

Busy day, had to stay up late to finish. But I did!

So. Horses have ropes. Ropes have ends. The ends go in driver’s hands. Easy, right? Sure it is! Especially when the rope ends are right there, flapping around. They weren’t even out of reach. Why, one rope knocked my hat off, with a whir and a snap.

Yeah. Something like that’s not out of reach at all.

A younger, dumber me would have tried to snatch at the hat, then probably ended up clinging to the door frame and trying to keep from sucked in under a wagon wheel. But I ain’t dumb like that. It’s a hat. I could always go back afterward and find it again. I might have to fight a bobcat or something to retrieve it, but Shamuses have a mystic way with animals. That is, they usually prefer to claw, instead of claw-claw-bite. So I kept my eye on the prize.

At least, until Priscilla went for the hat.

She had been watching behind me, and when my headgear went flying she leaned out just a little too far, and got herself off balance. To be fair, she did grab the hat, and for one brief second it looked like she could maintain an even strain; but then the wagon bumped a rut, and the magic was gone. I can still see the look on her face as she toppled back onto the indifferent road below…

…and then I grabbed her flailing hand with one of mine, and concentrated really hard on holding onto the door with the other.

11/02/2024 NotAWriMo, BANSHEE BEACH: 3362/53816.

This is the last day that I randomly just write whatever. Well, until the next time I’m away from my main files. Everything I wrote today is something I can use in the book, though.

Have I ever mentioned how much I hate fighting people who want to kill me? I don’t mean just not worrying if I can’t take a punch. I mean flat-out, no-fooling, want to put me in the dirt. It’s always scary, and kind of insulting. It’s not like I woke up that morning planning to do it to them.

It’s weird how easier the obsidian knives made it here, though. The two guys carrying them felt like shadows, smudgy blobs that didn’t want to do anything on their own, except put muscle behind the knives’ urge to slice through my precious hide. That always makes it easier, when you gotta do what you gotta do.

The poor bastards fought like blobs, too, with the kind of clumsy-looking slashes that looked easy enough to counter until you realized they weren’t gonna stop, and were too numb to feint , or get scared. And what their knives hit as we danced around the room, they curdled. That’s the only word for it. Anywhere that got scored by one looked discolored or slimed, with a mildewed stink that grew as we moved. This was definitely big-E Evil going on.

I still didn’t like smashing my knuckle-duster into the first cultist’s elbow. Some of it was the reek of old, baked-in evil coming off the guy, and some of it was the way his scream was cut off halfway, like the pain wasn’t worth indulging. But a lot of it was how the elbow felt as it fell apart. I don’t care what they tell you about berserkers or terminators, friend. When the joint don’t work, you can’t gut that out.

11/01/2024 NotAWriMo, BANSHEE BEACH: 1710/52164.

And so it begins. This is going to jump around ferociously, by the way: I have whole sections that go [write this later]. Well… it’s later.

Earl knew his stuff; and what he didn’t know, his wife had picked up for him. Between the two of them, and their apparently endless supply of kids, we had the coach unpacked and hidden away in no time. And I mean unpacked, and I definitely mean us. I didn’t wait for somebody to help with my bags, and neither did David and Patricia. I even grabbed Lucas’s for him, since he had gravitated towards helping get the horses back all the way down to just a little crazy.

His frown got bigger and bigger as we all worked, especially when Lucas noticed how we were all just a little frantic about it. “Y’all were looking in the wrong places,” he murmured to me as we pushed the coach the rest of the way into the barn. “The broomers landed twenty minutes ago, but you kept looking up, instead of south.”

“And what does that tell you, Lucas?”“That I was looking in the wrong place. You gotta take it seriously when the locals do something you don’t expect, Tom. They always know the area better than you. That’s why they’re the locals.”

#NotAWriMo starts in two days!

That’s the best I can come up with – anyway, November is when I finally finish BANSHEE BEACH. Regular writing should get all the bits filled in, and once that’s done I can start thinking about, well, everything else involved in getting that book out of the door. And after that?

The next one, obviously. This train keeps running for as long as I do.

For the record: I *will* be using November to finish BANSHEE BEACH.

I just don’t think that NaNoWriMo is a suitable thing to do it under, anymore. It’s not really the AI thing, honestly: I don’t care for AI-prompt generated material, I won’t buy it, but otherwise it’s not my problem. It’s the fact that last year strong allegations were made that NaNoWriMo was being used for some hinky stuff involving minors, and I’m not really comfortable referencing that organization anymore. I’ve never officially signed up for it, I don’t think, but I’ve still referenced the ‘contest’ often.

So now I need a new name for it for November.

Starting the pass-through on BANSHEE BEACH.

For clarification: what I’m doing right now is just rereading the existing text to BANSHEE BEACH, leaving notes on holes in the text, and generally reminding myself of the story. My priority is still to get TALES FROM THE FERMI RESOLUTION Vol 2 out, but I’m waiting on the next installment of edits. I might as well get other stuff done while I’ve got a little down time.

Moe Lane

PS: So far, the book doesn’t look half bad, actually. BANSHEE BEACH is part of a series, but I think it works as a standalone book, too. How about you buy a couple of copies of the first two, and tell me later if it all worked out?

#commissionearned

Back to the surfing worldview.

I’m reading one of their seminal texts (Gidget) now, to get a feel for the original mindset and the worldview. I still have a bunch of movies to work through, but I’m going to go about that nice and steady. I can’t really move forward on BANSHEE BEACH until I get a feel on Hollywood movie beach culture. That means research.

It does not, however, mean getting on a surfboard. I’m a writer, so yes, I’m insane. I’m not that kind of insane.

#commissionearned

Have blocked out BANSHEE BEACH.

It’s not been a fun couple of days, thanks to these lingering colds (and my kid’s ear infection, now thankfully responding to antibiotics). Yesterday in particular was a mess. I had to resort to making a meatloaf to mitigate my mood.

Today is better, not least because I sat down to work out the chapters for BANSHEE BEACH. Twenty four chapters, and now I know what happens in each one. That’ll let me write passages to match. Guess outlines are handy, after all. Who knew?

Welp. Guess it’s time to take a look at BANSHEE BEACH.

I somehow managed to get the manuscript for BANSHEE BEACH up to 50,000 words on the nose. I assume that I did that deliberately, because last year I had an unexpected case of Covid for Thanksgiving and it messed up my entire ‘thing.’ But that’s okay. I have enough to construct the rest of the book.

[Two hours later]

Continue reading Welp. Guess it’s time to take a look at BANSHEE BEACH.