PROJECT SHIVA was my first NaNoWriMo, and then I promptly put it in a box. But I am apparently doing my best to avoid working on TINSEL RAIN this week; so I got a powerful urge today to take the text, convert it to Scrivener, and put the PDF of the first draft up on Patreon, just for fun. It’s about half the size that it should be and needs a rewrite or three, but if you’re a Patron: enjoy!
If not…
Hmmm.
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Okay, I liked it. I think it’s a bit too steeped in The Former Life, although I understand the decision …
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It’s ..yes, rough. Needs those rewrites. As a writer, you’ve gotten much better, Moe; it’s obvious you have a story to tell here, just struggling with the craft.
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Not sure I’m the right demographic for it; used to read a fair bit of Clancy and King, but not recently. Also not sure of the wider world – clearly some world-build happened that didn’t get shown, so there’s definite potential.
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See what grows.
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Mew
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p.s. why yes, I am a sucker for certain conspiracy theories.