Writer Beware is a depressing, but unfortunately necessary, website.

I try not to read it too often, because the name is an accurate summation of Writer Beware‘s mission. There are a lot of scammers out there who specialize in going after independent authors and creators, because that’s where the fear, worry, and desperation is. Fear that you’re not going to be successful; worry that you’re not doing the right things; and desperation fueling your desire to do something, anything, that will relieve either one. Scammers love people like that.

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09/20/2024 Snippet, THE LAST DAYS OF UNHOLY TOLEDO.

Tough day, will not let that stop me.

At first the two fighting-men hesitated to slay, instead hoping to avoid the crawling wretches. But Nat hissed as one flailing claw struck his foot, chilling it immediately and making him stumble. Only Maddox’s lightning-fast grab of his shoulder kept the other man from falling. He stabbed down with his sword in the next motion, skewering the frothing attacker through the back. “Gah!” Maddox muttered. “I could feel the cold through the blade.”

“It will pass,” the Monsignor told them both. He idly impaled a few crawlers himself as they picked their way to the far door, seemingly indifferent as to whether his strikes killed clean. “They have just enough will to suck up heat, but wound them once and they can think of nothing else. But killing them works well enough, too. I do not suppose you fine fellows would like to wager on who can strike the most? …No? Pity.”

It took five minutes — or an hour; Nat and Maddox found time to oddly flow, down there between the braziers — of fending off the slow-motion stalkers before the three reached the doors that marked the end of the chamber. The Monsignor made no secret of his amused contempt as he watched the other two try to strike only those that came too close. “I tell you again: these creatures are weak. Too weak to be worth consideration. They chose to be here, and this is their reward. Why not amuse yourselves?”

Art pieces that use AI in the process have a ‘look.’ One not unlike the Mark of Cain.

It doesn’t matter how much you do yourself. You could draw the whole thing by hand – but once you start using Stable Diffusion or whatever, the program overwhelms the actual art. You invariably end up with generic popslop, and I frankly don’t know why you bothered to do any original work at all.

God, art historians are going to end up hating this decade.

Moe Lane

PS: My books’ cover art is AI-free. I won’t use an artist who uses it.

#commissionearned

09/18/2024 Snippet, THE LAST DAYS OF UNHOLY TOLEDO.

So I didn’t get as much done, but I got it started, and that was the hard part today.

The rooms were oddly proportioned, and worryingly angled. Shapes were wrong, and so were the shadows. The only light in each chamber were from great braziers, set outside the rooms themselves; their baleful fires flickered through tall, yet dirty stained glass windows, bathing each room in fantastical colors. It should have been darker; and yet the shadows themselves seemed to radiate an anti-light that revealed, yet brought no comfort.

This first chamber was all in blue, and the Monsignor made odd, mocking symbols with his fingers as they entered. “This is the Hall of Deserved Languor,” he told the other two, “and we must pass through it quickly.”

“Who would stop us?” Maddox started to mumble, then snapped his head as if fighting off a sudden weariness. “There are no defenders.”

“Look to your feet, fool!” Maddox bristled, but Nat looked – and then he swore, for some of the shadows were moving. The Monsignor muttered and threw up a mage-light, revealing the shadows to be crawling men and women. Of a sort: they were gaunt, with eyes always blinking, and hands and feet that were halfway to claws. Slow they looked and slow they moved, but there was a blind hunger in their faces that was no less cruel for being torpid.

09/17/2024 Snippet, THE LAST DAYS OF UNHOLY TOLEDO.

I figured out what was missing from this story: it needed more Edgar Allen Poe. So I did some reading tonight, and now I have a pretty good idea what happens now. So all I have to do is write it.

“This is a sacred place,” the Monsignor informed them as they descended the staircase. “One fallen into disuse, but still not for profane feet or eyes. Anyone who realizes that you do not belong here will try to slaughter you, so feel free to kill them first.”

“Many people have already gone this way this evening,” muttered Maddox. “The rails are greasy with sweat and fear. Have they formed this line you spoke of?”

“No.” Nat and Maddox could hear the scorn in the Monsignor’s voice, although its object was unclear. “Only a few in the hierarchy know of this place, and even fewer knew its greatest secret. Our wonderful anti-Pope is of the first group, but not the second. He has no greater goal this night than to rut and squeal until the Dragon-Bitch comes with her scouring fires.” He chuckled. “Perhaps he even thinks he can hide here down below, until she goes away.”