01/12/2023 Snippet, GHOSTS ON AN ALIEN WIND.

Filling in stuff!

We finally were able to properly hear the report that [spoiler] had died in a shuttle crash about twenty minutes after the Anticipant had — I don’t know how she managed to figure out what happened. Maybe it’s really easy for her to decipher static. I mean, if she’s at right angles to the rest of us anyway, every regular form of communication would be garbled half-nonsense to her. Why should static be a special case? At least she didn’t go crazy in the cabin, which is just as much fun for a pilot as it sounds. Instead, the Anticipant just retreated into herself, took a sedative from Oft, and was soon sleeping the sleep of the medicated.

Oft was apologetic about the whole thing. “It’s a side effect of her training,” he explained. “The Anticipant has been taught to come to accurate conclusions, from woefully incomplete data. The techniques work, but they come at a cost of heightened sensitivity. In her case, painfully so.”

I looked over. Asleep, she looked a lot older, but a bit less pained, and I wondered just what those ‘techniques’ involved. “So sudden unexpected news knocks her for a loop?”

“Not exactly,” Oft replied. “It has to be unexpected and malicious. The universe simply randomly being the universe would be another part of the pattern, or so I think I understand. A reaction like this comes from a deliberate attempt to wreck the pattern, for whatever foul purpose.”

“So you don’t think [spoiler] died in an accident.” I didn’t state it as a question, and Oft didn’t take it as one.

“Certainly not, and neither do you.”

GHOSTS ON AN ALIEN WIND Watch, 01/11/2023.

Mostly, I got the book rewired so that the sequence of events are in the right order (I did do about five hundred words). Now I’ll write bridges in key places in the narrative, smush it all together, then go through GHOSTS ON AN ALIEN WIND again to see what I’ve missed. Gonna kill me some secondary characters! Alas, it has to be done. I mean, it’s a science fiction horror novel, right? Somebody’s got to die.

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The flight back wasn’t anything much, for the first twenty minutes. I decided I wasn’t playing any games with the planetary network today. We were all better off just going ahead, and giving us all some time to process what we had seen. Twenty-one minutes in, I turned on the radio, since we were coming within range of what passed for a human communications network on One-Eighteen.
Twenty-two minutes in, the Anticipant gasped.
Even I could tell that wasn’t good, and a look at her face confirmed it. She was in full ‘white-eyed horror’ mode, only her suit wasn’t pulling her out of the state automatically. “Oft,” I carefully did not yell, “she’s gone fay!”
Oft had already detached himself from his seat; he moved to intercept her. “It’s not Fear Reflex Syndrome,” he told me over one shoulder as he grabbed her shaking hands. That seemed to calm her down, so maybe it wasn’t FeRe; people in the middle of one of those episodes hate being touched. “She’s just had some horrible news.”
That threw me for a loop. “From… where?” I gestured around the cabin. “There’s no news here to hear!”
“Except the radio.”
“It’s barely above static.”
“Not to her, Pam.” Oft shrugged, not letting go of the Anticipant’s hands. “Before you ask: I don’t know what she heard, either.” His face fell. “All I know is, it’s something personally traumatic.”
Which did not sound good.

Finished reviewing the GHOSTS ON AN ALIEN WIND draft.

I think I’ve straightened out how the rest of GHOSTS ON AN ALIEN WIND should go, and about sixty percent of it will involve moving chunks of book from chapter to chapter. It’s the remaining forty percent that will be the heavy lifting. Still, it’s a lot easier to figure out how to get the book finished now.

My head still hurts, though. Thinking about writing is a lot more tiring than actually writing. I suspect because it requires more analytical brainpower, or something. I dunno, I was an English major, and not the kind that spent four years learning about neurolinguistics. I was lucky to get Systems of the Brain, and an Independent Study*.

Continue reading Finished reviewing the GHOSTS ON AN ALIEN WIND draft.

Brain hurts.

Brain-strain is absolutely the worst, isn’t it? I spent possibly a half hour too long concentrating on the dang book, and now I have a wizzo of a headache. All of which argues that I should get some sleep, let the old grey matter relax, and so forth.

Still: got up to Chapter 14 of GHOSTS ON AN ALIEN WIND. About halfway done, and after that I can block out what still needs to be written. Huzzah!

Started up on GHOSTS ON AN ALIEN WIND again.

Right now I’m reading the text, noting characters and places on a spreadsheet. Basically, I want to make sure that everybody I introduce gets their status resolved, one way or the other – and since GHOSTS ON AN ALIEN WIND is a spooky science fiction novel, a lot of those statuses are going to be fatal ones. Also, if I need to kill somebody off in the parts I haven’t written yet, who better than a character I’ve introduced already?

Finally, the book has plot holes. I need to fill them, but first I need to see and identify them. This requires a fresh look at the text as a whole… but you can only do so much of that before your eyes start to glaze over.

Scheduled plans for this month!

Two main ones, really. I need to get FALLING WALLS OF LUNACY finished up (that’s the Kickstarter reward from TINSEL RAIN: Lovecraftian horror on the moon!), and I need to get GHOSTS ON AN ALIEN WIND into alpha reader draft form. I think the total wordage necessary would be no more than twenty thousand, which sounds doable in a month, but I guess we’ll find out by December 31st. I will probably be spending the weekend taking a hard look at both, and trying to block out how to handle each job.

Yay. …Sorry. It’s just that this is the non-sexy part of writing.

#commissionearned

Looks like I need to push back GHOSTS ON AN ALIEN WIND’s publishing by a month.

It’s not a financial thing, fortunately (the money pools should be refilled by then, no worries). It’s a “this book needs about 10K more words than I expected” thing. I’m going to aim for a new target of 90K, which isn’t really hard but I’ll need time to get in draft shape. So I’ll be integrating what I have for the rest of the month, ‘take time off’ to write the new Tom Vargas novel for NaNoWriMo*, then probably spend December getting the rest of GHOSTS ON AN ALIEN WIND ready for my first reader.

A book a year ain’t bad, anyway.

*New working title: BANSHEE BEACH.

#commissionearned